"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other."
Mother Teresa
For 60 years, working with the poor and giving all her LOVE, Mother Teresa's 'Missionary of Charity' became a world wide organization with many participants. She is the heroes of many eyes. The heaven's gift. The Mother of the poor. She is a great example of the values of what one dream that bloom into a huge success,or something that we're worth fighting for.
Fighting for the LOVE is important, as from the following quote; "The hunger for love is much more difficult to remove than the hunger for bread" (Mother Teresa) This quotes explains that the needs of love is more important than the need for food because the 'love' stays in our heart, not easily forgotten and makes ourselves to not forget that we belong to each other. Love allows us to give, and from giving, we get. In another word, 'sharing is caring' which we often heard, it explains that we need each other to live and together, we fight for something that we values.
Don't be afraid to try, "Do not wait for leader, do it alone; person to person" Mother Teresa said as a lesson to everyone. Which means we can do it alone, by ourselves, person to person. Start with a small number and take the responsibility to aim higher. If everyone follows it, there would be less or no unfortunates left because everyone, with the passion to care and to love for a little amount of people can take up the whole world. Now everyone can make a difference, make what we want to fight for come true.
Without LOVE from one another, more people would be hungry, both for bread and for love. The world might be silent, no communications, forgotten that everyone belong to each other. But Mother Teresa, being the Heaven's gift that was sent to earth, with all her love created and taught people around that together we are the heart to the world and our goal is to fight for what is worth fighting for, and that is not letting the heart of the world fades away.
I think that you could have made more connections but I understood your point. Maybe you could also have a better title, something a bit more of a hook, maybe a quote said by Mother Teresa? I think maybe you have done enough research, but maybe you could have done a bit more, just to throw in more facts. You transitions are very smooth, and the sentence fluency is good. I agree when you said to fight for love alone, as not a lot of people are ready to take on the role to lead a lot of people. Why not lead yourself?
ReplyDeleteI agree with you that i need a better title, like you say, maybe a quote said by Mother Teresa. But I didn't get the last part of your comment, can you please explain more, (if you can)
ReplyDeleteThank You for such great advice!